So one thing I am certainly slacking on is reviews of the publications I read. I had told myself at the beginning of the year that I wanted to post more reviews. I enjoy reviewing poetry and stories, I want to give a boost to the publications I read, and I like learning more about authors in the field.
BUT, and here is the but - what happens when something you read is perhaps not terribly impressive, or even (gasp) maybe something you don't actually like at all?
I've often held back from reviewing material because I can't give it an honest two thumbs up. Being a very modestly published writer and poet myself, I am sensitive to the fact that not everything I've written is composed of gorgeous and stunning prose with fascinating characters and a plot no one's ever conceived before. I understand that it can be rough getting any exposure at all for one's writing, and then getting a ho-hum or even negative review would be disheartening. Still, I would vastly prefer being reviewed in a constructive fashion that would allow me to improve, rather than to receive no notice at all.
But what has ended up happening is this sort of double standard - if I know someone is a well established, best-seller-type author, I write reviews that offer a 'What I Liked' and 'What I Didn't Like' sort of thing. For authors that (seem to me to be) newer or are looking for exposure - I don't tend to write anything because I don't want to be dishonest or discouraging. (After all, there are few pieces that are so universally fabulous that a review will be utterly positive.)
Wait. Did you catch that? So I am not writing about the people and publications that need it the most. This conundrum needs a solution. I'd like to spend more time on lesser known authors and smaller publications than anything else, but that's not what I'm doing. Mostly out of fear. I don't want to discourage or upset another writer, and I don't want to damage the reputation of a publication. And I don't really know where I'm being a bit overly sensitive, and where I'm being really just the right amount of sensitive.
So what to do? Well, research, naturally, being the geek that I am. I just read a pile of posts on how to do online reviews of fiction, poetry, etc. Many point out that one shouldn't be 'cruel' and that all criticism should be 'positive' - which is obvious enough. But no one addresses the issue of how to write up honest reviews of newer writers and smaller pubs that actually help to boost those people, rather than bring them down. (Maybe this means I should figure how how, and then write that post, hmmm?)
Oh, and by honest review I mean the bad with the good. I could just write reviews about 'What I Liked' and leave the rest out. But then someone might read an issue based on my review, not like the issue, and think my reviews are pretty useless. Which they would be.
So what is your opinion, and your experience, with writing and receiving honest reviews? Would you prefer an honest review of your work to no review at all? How do you like to see critical comments framed? Do you have a set of guidelines you follow when doing reviews, a creed, a statement of intent or some such?
Send some thoughts my way. This is your chance to chime in - since I'll probably plow ahead with reviews to the best of my ability, and your stuff might be in there, ya know ...
Image Credit - photoxpress.com
Tuesday, July 30, 2013
Saturday, July 20, 2013
Vonnie Winslow Crist and When Opportunity Knocks
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| Vonnie Winslow Crist |
Vonnie was the guest speaker at my local writers club meeting this last Thursday, and entertained us all for an hour with anecdotes from her career and practical insight into writing and publishing. Her works include: Essential Fables and River of Stars, both poetry collections from Lite Circle Books, fantasy novel The Enchanted Skean - Book 1 of the Chronicles of Lifthrasir from Mockingbird Lane Press, as well as The Greener Forest and Owl Light, collections of short stories and more from Cold Moon Press. She has also edited much, volunteered much, and produced many columns and articles. Her talk was titled "Be Ready When Opportunity Knocks and How to Find Those Hidden Opportunities."
Her first piece of advice is to always be writing. She underscores the fact that you can't respond to any publishing opportunity unless you have appropriate work ready to go. Keeping a backlog of poems, stories, and manuscripts means you have something in your pocket when you see a notice, hear a rumor, or find a great contest - and the deadline is coming up fast - like tomorrow. Don't stop writing as you wait to see if your entry wins or if your submission is accepted. Write something new while you wait.
Along with 'always be writing' is keep improving. Vonnie points out that every piece of writing we do, no matter how brief, helps us improve our craft. She emphasizes the importance of finding a critique group, and making sure it is one where all the members have the same level of writing expertise. Read articles, magazines and books about the craft. For fiction writers she recommends The First Five Pages by Noah Lukeman. You might want to take workshops, courses, or even go back to school (as she did) and earn an advanced degree in writing!
Vonnie suggests we be creative about finding publication "homes" for our work. She reads the bios of other writers to see where they've been published, and checks out directory style websites appropriate for our genre (I happen to use ralan.com and duotrope.com) Don't neglect local outlets such as newsletters and bulletins, and keep an eye open for anthologies in your genre. You can't underestimate the library, either. Use your community (below) as a source of information on unique places to publish.
She emphasizes the importance of staying connected with the community. This includes other writers, editors, and publishers. Staying connected can mean: attending writers' conferences, joining societies, attending conventions, volunteering to edit pieces or write articles, helping out with local meetings, etc. Some of these opportunities will cost money and others will be free labor at first, but all can have payoffs down the line.
Vonnie points out that one opportunity can lead to another, so leverage opportunities. For example, she won a poetry chapbook contest, and used that as the means to get a publisher interested in a full sized book of poetry.
Finally, she says, "When you see an opening, jump! You can't fear rejection - say 'Yes' then work hard."
Actually, she said a great deal more, but you'll have to be lucky enough to catch her in person for the whole talk, and to enjoy her entertaining style.
Image Credit: Vonnie Winslow Crist from her website.
Monday, April 15, 2013
NaPoWriMo Week Three - Time is on Your Side
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| The trail seems long when you are in the middle. "On A Quest" by Ehecod |
For inspiration and more insight into our themes of journeys and time limits, we have this compelling piece of art: "On A Quest" by Ehecod on deviantArt.com. It depicts a scene that certainly appeals to me right now - a small person, a long path, and in the distance there is perhaps the end of the trail, way up high. It isn't just the content of the image that appeals, it is knowing that it was done quickly. This image might be termed a "speed painting" as it was done in about an hour. It is amazing what can be conveyed in such a short time - the sense of distance, space, longing, weariness, determination, beauty, and so much more. Putting a time limit on our work can be highly motivating, challenging us to see exactly what we can do if we focus, concentrate, and really apply ourselves. The time limit means we know that the end is always in sight, and so we feel more free to really go all out with our effort.
This is the week to use time limits as a powerful tool. If you've fallen behind, time limits can be the key to catching up, and getting back on the trail. Here are the prompts and exercises for week three, starting with this evocative art.
Monday, April 15 - Monday is, of course Art Day. Take another look at "On A Quest." What emotions does it bring up? What is the story of of this person, and what will they find when they finally reach the city on the mountain? Use some of these words and phrases to form a draft poem, but give yourself a time limit - fifteen minutes at most.
Tuesday, April 16 - Tuesdays and Saturdays are Pick a Prompt Days. Visit the archive of speculative fiction prompts on this blog entitled "Prompt the Muse." For this prompt, pick something that you can do with a time limit - say twenty minutes from start with the prompt to finishing the draft poem. Don't think about it too hard, just get the words down.
Wednesday, April 17 - Choose a hobby that you enjoy, and answer these four questions, with four words each. Do this fast, two minutes total, and don't feel the need to stick to the questions too closely. Hobby consists of? It makes me feel? Sensing it is? It provides? It relates to? I chose my hobby of origami, and my lists are: Hobby consists of - origami, paper, crafts, folding. It makes me feel - satisfied, frustrated, accomplished, entertained. Sensing it is - beauty, symmetry, smooth, light. It provides - soothing, escape, perfection, controlled. It relates to - creation, birth, new, real. Use at least two words from each section to draft a poem. For this you get eight minutes, for a total of a draft poem in ten minutes.
Thursday, April 18 - Thursday is Camera Day. Take some pictures with your camera, and choose one to use as inspiration for a draft poem. In keeping with our themes, find one that makes you think of a journey/quest, or something that brings up the concept of time and deadlines. Feel free to take photos all week, and then pull out your favorite for Camera Day. (If you don't have a camera, draw a picture of the scene, and then use that for your inspiration.)
Friday, April 19 - Think of a time you were confronted with a deadline. It can be a work project, trying to catch a plane, an upcoming holiday, or anything that had a hard and fast limit. Think of this subject and your deadline in two ways. First, write out negative words and phrases that come to you about your subject and its deadline. Then, write out positive words and phrases about this subject and deadline. Use this material to create a draft poem in two stanzas.
Saturday, April 20 - Tuesdays and Saturdays are Pick a Prompt Days. Visit the archive of speculative fiction prompts on this blog entitled "Prompt the Muse." Find a prompt that makes you think of a long trek, quest, or trip. Do the writing, and then choose images, phrases, or sensations from your writing to include in a draft poem.
Sunday, April 21 - Short poems can take longer to write than long poems, but for this week, we are going to form a set of haiku on a schedule! Give yourself four minutes to write down words that evoke the four seasons. Don't be too restrictive, feel free to associate as you like. Now, pick a subject that exists in all four seasons - sports, holidays, events, or even yourself or your pets, for example. Give yourself four minutes to write four sentences, each with your subject and some of your seasonal words. Give yourself another four minutes to go back and try to reform each of these sentences into the 5-7-5 syllables per line pattern associated with haiku. It does not need to be perfect, go with the flow and the sense of the tension in the lines.
If you are behind, you can use these four haiku as four separate poems. If not, you have a nice set of poems for your 21st day of NaPoWriMo.
Image Credit: "On A Quest" used with the generous permission of the artist, Lassi, Ehecod on deviantArt.com.
Thursday, April 11, 2013
Daily Astronomy Poetry for NaPoWriMo 2013
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| Rising to the challenge of NaPoWriMo Sky Pirates No. 8 by quartertime |
Here's a taste of some of the interesting writing that has already appeared ...
On Imperturbable Music, the author muses about his seeing Saturn through a telescope:
The first view was a jolt.
It really looked like they said it would,
pale and perfect, ansa to ansa.
A platonic ideal of itself
even today.
Taken from Planet's Above, we are led to consider the line between our dreams and reality:
So hide, obscure, amongst the fading wings
of Icarian ice, now stripped and set ablaze -
but know; our sleepless eyes will find you there,
unless ... unless you are just myths, of course.
From Tycho Girl's blog, we are inspired to keep on going, like a rocket:
watch the blue line
trailing from my candle
’cause I’m getting there.
So if you enjoy writing, astronomy, NaPoWriMo, and especially all three, you'll want to check out the following blogs this month (twitter handles also noted):
Tycho Girl http://tychogirl.wordpress.com/ @tychogirl
Imperturbable Music http://imperturbable-music.blogspot.com/ @asrivkin
AstroPoetAmee http://astropoetamee.wordpress.com/ @AstropoetAmee
Bizzare Lag Phenomena http://iyzie.wordpress.com/ @iyzie
Sue Couch NaPoWriMo2013 http://sylvanellenapowrimo.wordpress.com/ @suzifulham
Planets Above http://planetsabove.blogspot.com/ @Alex_Parker
Image Credit: Sky Pirates No. 8 by quartertime on deviantArt.com in the public domain.
Monday, April 8, 2013
NaPoWriMo Week 2 - Time to Shake it Up
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| Time to embrace the unexpected and uncomfortable. "METAVERSE" by Robert Steven Connett on deviantArt.com. |
So I think of Week Two as the time to shake it up a bit. Time to try things you haven't considered before. Time to pull in some new influences and move out of the comfort zone.
And if today's Monday Art Day doesn't shake you up, nothing will. This is "METAVERSE" by Robert Steven Connett on deviantArt.com. I thoroughly enjoy this sort of art - the kind where my mind and emotions will not settle. The artist comments "I thought it would be interesting to create a "stage like" outer environment with which to gaze in at inner world I created. This "outer world", like an opening in a cave, is something I have not done before." The outer frame provides the context from which we view this strange new place. There is so much happening here - wild colors, a mix of organic and industrial imagery, motion, and EYES everywhere! The image is teeming with a strange sort of life filled with wires and light. Creatures are spawning, swimming, hunting, and crawling.
So here are the prompts and exercises for week two, starting with this evocative art.
Monday, April 8 - Monday is, of course Art Day. Take another look at METAVERSE. Spend some time checking out the details in the piece, and how colors and lighting are used. How does the art make you feel? Disturbed, energized, anxious? What genre would you give the piece - horror, science fiction, fantasy, or simply science? Write a poem in that genre, using some of the emotions you feel looking at this art. As an additional challenge, write from the viewpoint of a creature inside the art itself.
Tuesday, April 9 - Tuesdays and Saturdays are Pick a Prompt Days. Visit the archive of speculative fiction prompts on this blog entitled "Prompt the Muse." Pick weird ones for this week in keeping with our "Shake it up" theme. Do the writing, and then choose images, phrases, or sensations from your writing to include in a draft poem.
Wednesday, April 10 - Find a word that rattles you and shakes you up in some way - good, bad, or a mix of feelings. The word could be anything, since words and experience are so personal. A few that I might pick are: blood, mother, crash, god, and hate. Pick one and write out ten related words or phrases than include it, like goddess, godhead, godliness, ungodly, etc. Write a poem using at least three of your related words, trying for that feeling of being rattled or shaken up. An additional challenge - after you draft the poem, remove all the lines with your related words, and reform the poem.
Thursday, April 11 - Thursday is Camera Day. Take some pictures with your camera, and choose one to use as inspiration for a draft poem. Try to find a subject or scene that makes you feel something in a new way, or even makes you uncomfortable. Feel free to take photos all week, and then pull out your favorite for Camera Day. (If you don't have a camera, draw a picture of the scene, and then use that for your inspiration.)
Friday, April 12 - Find a poem that takes you somewhere new, or out of your usual mental space for writing. You don't need to know why, or to explain it. Something about 20 lines long is just about right. Do the classic exercise where you write out each line of this poem with an open space in between. Now fill in the missing lines with your own work, responding to what comes before and after. Remove the lines of the original poem, leaving behind only your responses. Take ten or so of these lines and reform them into a draft poem.
Saturday, April 13 - Tuesdays and Saturdays are Pick a Prompt Days. Visit the archive of speculative fiction prompts on this blog entitled "Prompt the Muse." Pick weird ones for this week in keeping with our "Shake it up" theme. Do the writing, and then choose images, phrases, or sensations from your writing to include in a draft poem.
Sunday, April 14 - Look through your books and try to find one that rattles you, either because it is horror, is on a difficult subject, or is connected with a time in your life when things were in motion. Flip through and copy down at least ten words or phrases that strike a chord in you. A few I found from my chosen book are: compulsion, fix yourself, silence, body all bent, convalescent, and obsess. Use five of these words or phrases in a poem. Additional challenge, remove the lines with your specific words and reform the poem.
Image Credit: "METAVERSE" used with the generous permission of the artist Robert Steven Connett on deviantArt.com
Monday, April 1, 2013
NaPoWriMo Week 1 - Writing the Inner Music
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| "Forest spirint" by sparrow-chan on deviantArt Russian artist Yartseva Marya |
It is time to unlock the door and let the words flow forth. The act of creation is imagined here in this compelling artwork by Russian artist sparrow-chan on deviantArt.com. Of this piece the artist comments, "Mystic creature sits quietly between ancient trees in dense forest. Marvelous harp with strings made of spider web produces calm, wonder sounds from elder times. Who knows if time itself means something for this mysterious harper? But as long as she plays the heartbeat of nature will be strong." So in that vein, what we are called to do this month is keep on writing.
Try not to think about if it is 'good' poetry or 'bad' poetry. The job for this month is to write drafts of poems and edit them later. I know from experience that some of mine won't be salvageable, most will be okay, but not great, and then a few will be rather interesting. Those, with some good editing, will end up making the whole month worthwhile.
So with all the other distractions, don't forget to tap into the inner music. Here are some prompts and exercises to keep things flowing over the course of the week.
Monday, April 1 - Monday is Art Day. Each Monday I'll have a piece of art here on the blog to try to jog your imagination. Take a look at today's art. What is the music being played on this harp? Are there lyrics to the piece? What gives the music its power? How does it make you feel? Answer those questions, and then write a draft of a poem about this magical song.
Tuesday, April 2 - Tuesdays and Saturdays are Pick a Prompt Days. Visit the archive of speculative fiction prompts on this blog entitled "Prompt the Muse." Do the writing, and then choose images, phrases, or sensations from your writing to include in a draft poem.
Wednesday, April 3 - Think of a myth that inspires you. It can be any kind of story, ancient or modern, with a mythic or fairy tale quality. Write a short bit of prose being as descriptive as you can, telling about this myth. Take out seven adjectives from your writing, and draft a poem.
Thursday, April 4 - Thursday is Camera Day. Take some pictures with your camera, and choose one to use as inspiration for a draft poem. Try to find a subject or scene that speaks to you emotionally. Feel free to take photos all week, and then pull out your favorite for Camera Day. (If you don't have a camera, draw a picture of the scene, and then use that for your inspiration.)
Friday, April 5 - Think about a time when you were really frightened. It might have been watching a scary movie or reading a thriller novel. Perhaps it was when you were worried about monsters under the bed, during a storm, or something far more serious. Write down phrases expressing how you felt. Use five of those phrases to draft a poem.
Saturday, April 6 - Tuesdays and Saturdays are Pick a Prompt Days. Visit the archive of speculative fiction prompts on this blog entitled "Prompt the Muse." Do the writing, and then choose images, phrases, or sensations from your writing to include in a draft poem.
Sunday, April 7 - Take a walk and go word/phrase collecting. Write down any interesting words you see in print, or phrases describing what you see. After you have twenty, head home choose five, and create a draft poem from these (if you can't leave the house, then tour your home for a word collection.)
Image Credit: "Forest spirint" by sparrow-chan on deviantArt.com - Russian artist Yartseva Marya
Saturday, March 30, 2013
NaPoWriMo is Coming Right at You - Five Tips to Be Prepared
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| NaPoWriMo is coming at you. It's not too late to get some preparation done. |
I am never adequately prepared, since there isn't really a best way to prepare for poetry madness except to go crazy. But this year I did manage to come up with a few tips for myself. I thought I'd share them here since others might want some ideas for how they might inspire themselves.
1. Find some good prompts and exercises. Find blogs, journals, and books with good prompts. I'm going to post a selection of ideas right here at the start of each week of NaPo, using some new thoughts I've had as well as prompts from my "Prompt the Muse" archive. Check places like deviantArt for people who do things a little more off the wall.
2. Surround yourself with poetry. As always, the best inspiration for writing is reading. Get your favorite poetry books down, and then find some you haven't read yet. Start each writing session with a little reading, and your creative flow will, well, flow.
3. Fill your toolbox. Inspiration can come from anywhere, so give yourself some room to bring new ideas to the surface. Your toolbox might include paper, markers, paints, camera, computer, favorite pen, clay, music, picture book, or whatever. When you are stuck, go to your toolbox and let yourself play.
4. Connect with the community. Don't let the unrelenting pace of NaPo drag you down. Make a list of others participating in this madness so you can stay in touch via twitter, blog comments, facebook or even in real life (heavens). Your poetry pals are your best source of support when things are going slow, and greatest fans when you have a banner day!
5. Take Care of Yourself. Now is a good time to consider what you'll need over the next month to stay at your writing best. I'm a big fan of nutritious food, good sleep, and moderate exercise (even if I don't actually do what I should, when I should). I know perfectly well that taking care of myself will result in more stamina and energy for writing. I'm thinking right now of what I need to do over the next month to increase the chances that food, sleep, and exercise won't be missed.
Good luck with NaPoWriMo! Check back in here for daily prompts and writing exercises, hopefully to be posted at the beginning of each week (that starts tomorrow, yikes!)
Image Credit: Pink Sherbet Photography Flikr via Creative Commons CC 2.0
Monday, March 18, 2013
Grabbing The Golden Fleece of Writing: What's Your Great Prize?
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| Grab your writing treasure and run with it. "Colchian" by "MO-ffie" on deviantArt.com |
This fantastic image has been a favorite of mine for some time now, as I've been contemplating the questions above within the context of writing. Writing is a tremendous risk, and each of us has a different idea of what is worth that risk, and what the true "prize" can be. Consider for a moment - what are the greatest challenges or barriers that you face regarding your writing? What treasures do you hope to gain? When will you have time to sit back and enjoy what you have earned, or do you feel you have to keep on running?
As a writer with mental illness issues, I often find my greatest challenge and my greatest treasure are exactly the same thing. That is - writing itself. I love writing, it is its own reward. At the same time, writing is scary, even terrifying, and seems to dog my heels with its fangs and fiery breath. In my image, writing is both the fleece and the monster.
I'm working on a short story right now that I can't finish. My mind, as is often the case, is filled with self-doubt and even self-sabotage. I can't get the negative "voices" to give it a rest. They act as if they know so much more than the positive voices. "This story is dumb. Why did you want to write about this in the first place? This one isn't any fun to read. Are you sure you want to deal with 'that' issue in this piece? This story sounds trite. You don't know even understand what you are writing about, what are you trying to do here? This is a waste of time. You aren't doing anything important by writing this story." And on and on. These are the "voices" of writing for me, borne from a history of anxiety and depression disorders. These are the voices that follow me like a angry monster.
In the scenario of me and my short story, the beast has managed to get its teeth into the fleece. I am in a tug-of-war trying to retrieve it and make off. I feel like the tiny figure, and the monster seems so huge. I have to continually prompt the positive voices, and keep fighting. I need to be bold, to continue to take risks, to ignore the dark ideas that would kill every story before it even gets half-made. I need to yank hard, grab my fleece and run like crazy, not looking back for an instant. Take another look at that piece of art. That beast is scary.
It's possible that if I thought the beast would stop chasing me if I dropped the fleece, that I would do it. You know, give up, toss the prize away into the monster's mouth, and be free of it. But I know that isn't true. That monster follows me no matter what treasure I seek, however small. So I might as well try to grab the biggest and the shiniest - writing - and run like crazy.
So what were your answers? What is your goal, your great treasure to be found in the context of writing? What is the monster chasing you and trying to snatch your prize away? How do you win this race, and finally have your moment of glee, throwing your fleece about your shoulders and dancing in the sun?
Image Credit: "Colchian" by "MO-ffie" on deviantArt.com
My comments: I have always loved this piece of art. There is an intense sense of motion and urgency. Along with that, there is a hint of humor, since the hero is so very tiny - a stick figure with a fleece running for their life from a gratuitously massive monster.
Friday, March 8, 2013
Building Audience for Speculative Poetry: Overall Goals
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| Euterpe - Muse of Poetry |
To that end, I started my foray into definitions in that post (and I will continue to work on definitions throughout the whole audience-building process), and now I am going to start thinking about assessment.
By assessment I mean the suite of tools, data, and procedures that let you know if you are succeeding, and if not, what you need to change to put yourself on the right path. Assessment helps you define your goals and then lets you know if you've actually achieved them. Like definitions, it is something that goes with you throughout a project.
In considering what assessment I would develop for my little (har) project here, the first thing I need to know is, what do I really want to accomplish, what does that mean, and how will I know when I've done it? Trying to frame an overarching goal into words is tough ... so instead, here are some of the markers one might look for as they go forward. This is just a brainstorm at this point - I'm looking for input from you.
- More people writing spec poems (also could be more poems being written)
- More people reading spec poems (also could be more poems being read)
- More journals and mags publishing spec poems
- More general buzz about spec poetry (more blogs with spec poetry and related topics, more tweets, more general literary news about spec poetry.)
- More spec poetry events like readings, talks, panels, etc.
- More spec poetry education opportunities like IRL or online classes
- More spec poetry by POC, queer, marginalized, people-we-historically-miss authors
- More spec poetry awards
- More spec poetry groups, organizations, societies
- More spec poetry resources, such as bibliographies, Who's Who lists, etc.
- More interaction with spec poetry and other fields such as science, visual art, music, etc.
- More general respect for spec poetry as a genre
- etc.
What would you like to see on such a list? What changes in the area of speculative fiction would really fire you up, make you happy, thrill you, etc.? What would success look like for you? (And here is the question to tip off the next blog post - how would you go about measuring it?)
Image Credit: Euterpe, Muse of Poetry by Guffens, Wikimedia Commons, Public Domain
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